In his recent work “On the New Literacy,” Clive Thompson suggests that technology has improved and helped the younger generation more than dragged it down. He is arguing that without things like texting, e-mail or even face book kids would never write a sentence nonetheless a paragraph outside of school. Thompson claims that although we use shorthand writing when testing or other communicative ways, in the end we know who our audience is and change the way we get our point across according to that. He starts off his essay with a short take from English professor John Sutherland, University College of London. Sutherland states “Face book encourages narcissistic blabbering, video and PowerPoint have replaced carefully crafted essays, and texting has dehydrated language into ‘bleak, bald, sad shorthand.” What Sutherland says is pretty much what Thompson is arguing against. In his next paragraph he brings in Andrea Lunford- professor of writing and rhetoric at Stanford University. Lunford’s argument is on that he can agree with. She says “I think we’re in the midst of a literacy revolution the likes of which we haven’t seen since Greek civilization.” Her main idea is that technology isn’t “killing our ability to write, its reviving it- and pushing our literacy in bold new directions.” One implication of Thompson’s treatment of technology is that students today almost always write for an audience and that gives them a different sense of what continues good writing. Although Thompson does not say so directly, he apparently assumes that technology is only helping, and old fashioned teaching will always benefit and be something solid, the more modern gadgets are still good to have.
My own view is just as the one Lunsford and Thompson state, I agree with them fully. Though I concede that everything on the internet or each individual puts out may not always be reliable, I still maintain that technology has only improved our views and ways of writing. For example, when I text I usually text close friends and use abbreviations. When I e-mail it’s both to a professor or family member and in those I tend to type out short complete sentences. Where as in class I am more accustomed to going into specific detail to make sure I can write all the information I know to get my full point across to the teacher. Although some may object that by us short handing our vocabulary is only ‘dumming’ us down, I reply that with what Lunsford and Thompson stated above “It’s becoming clear that online media are pushing literacy into cool directions.” The issue is important because as times change and new generations come the definition of literacy will continue to be changed and we’re just going to have to keep up with it or work around it.
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Welcome to our Eng 100 Blog “Conversations Beyond the Classroom”! The title of this blog refers to the community of active readers & collaborative learners we are creating by sharing our academic writing for Eng 100 with each other + a larger group of students, instructors, academics, and just about anybody who chooses to follow our blog! When you write and post your reader responses here (and, later, as you write your essays for the course), I encourage you to use this audience to conceptualize who you are writing for and, most important, how to communicate your ideas so that this group of academic readers and writers can easily follow your line of thinking. Think about it this way: What do you need to explain and articulate in order for the other bloggers to understand your response to the essays we’ve read in class? What does your audience need to know about those essays and the authors who wrote them? And how can you show your readers, in writing, which ideas you add to these “conversations” that take place in the texts we study?
As students of Eng 100, you will use this blog to begin conversations with other academic writers on campus (students and instructors alike). We become active readers of each other’s writing when we comment on posts here. And, best of all, we are using this space to share ideas! We encourage you to use this blog to further think through the topics and writing strategies you will be introduced to this quarter. As always, be sure to give credit to those people whose ideas you borrow for your own thinking and writing (you should do this in the blog by commenting on their post, but you will also be required to cite what you borrow from your peers/instructors if and when it winds up in your essays. More details on that later…).
Finally, keep in mind that writing to and for this audience is a good way to prepare for the panel of readers (faculty at WCC) who will be reading and assessing your writing portfolio at the end of the quarter. We hope that as a large group of active readers, we can better prepare each other for this experience. But, in the meantime, let’s have fun with it! I am really excited see how far we can take this together!
--Mary Hammerbeck, Instructor of Eng 100
As students of Eng 100, you will use this blog to begin conversations with other academic writers on campus (students and instructors alike). We become active readers of each other’s writing when we comment on posts here. And, best of all, we are using this space to share ideas! We encourage you to use this blog to further think through the topics and writing strategies you will be introduced to this quarter. As always, be sure to give credit to those people whose ideas you borrow for your own thinking and writing (you should do this in the blog by commenting on their post, but you will also be required to cite what you borrow from your peers/instructors if and when it winds up in your essays. More details on that later…).
Finally, keep in mind that writing to and for this audience is a good way to prepare for the panel of readers (faculty at WCC) who will be reading and assessing your writing portfolio at the end of the quarter. We hope that as a large group of active readers, we can better prepare each other for this experience. But, in the meantime, let’s have fun with it! I am really excited see how far we can take this together!
--Mary Hammerbeck, Instructor of Eng 100
I find it true also that there are in fact more ways to write and that the new ways people write are in fact towards a live audience. We are used to the standard protocol that the teacher wants us to write and thus showing that people would rather write their own way. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteI have to say that i agree with everything you say. the only thing i was wondering, in the article when they say in the old days people didnt write outside of school at all, and now people are on facebook and twitter, they write blogs, and there is just so much writing outside of the classroom, well in the old days didn they write letters? or took notes? i think thats a strong conversation you could have with the author in an essay if you were to write one and disagree with the author.
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