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Welcome to our Eng 100 Blog “Conversations Beyond the Classroom”! The title of this blog refers to the community of active readers & collaborative learners we are creating by sharing our academic writing for Eng 100 with each other + a larger group of students, instructors, academics, and just about anybody who chooses to follow our blog! When you write and post your reader responses here (and, later, as you write your essays for the course), I encourage you to use this audience to conceptualize who you are writing for and, most important, how to communicate your ideas so that this group of academic readers and writers can easily follow your line of thinking. Think about it this way: What do you need to explain and articulate in order for the other bloggers to understand your response to the essays we’ve read in class? What does your audience need to know about those essays and the authors who wrote them? And how can you show your readers, in writing, which ideas you add to these “conversations” that take place in the texts we study?

As students of Eng 100, you will use this blog to begin conversations with other academic writers on campus (students and instructors alike). We become active readers of each other’s writing when we comment on posts here. And, best of all, we are using this space to share ideas! We encourage you to use this blog to further think through the topics and writing strategies you will be introduced to this quarter. As always, be sure to give credit to those people whose ideas you borrow for your own thinking and writing (you should do this in the blog by commenting on their post, but you will also be required to cite what you borrow from your peers/instructors if and when it winds up in your essays. More details on that later…).

Finally, keep in mind that writing to and for this audience is a good way to prepare for the panel of readers (faculty at WCC) who will be reading and assessing your writing portfolio at the end of the quarter. We hope that as a large group of active readers, we can better prepare each other for this experience. But, in the meantime, let’s have fun with it! I am really excited see how far we can take this together!

--Mary Hammerbeck, Instructor of Eng 100



Monday, October 11, 2010

Summary Clive Thompson

Clive Thompson has recently put out his thoughts and beliefs about how technology is affecting the modern student of today. His conclusion, to the surprise of a lot I would assume, was that technology is affecting students in a positive way. He quotes John Sutherland, an English professor at University College of London, as saying that texting has dehydrated language into "bleak, bald, sad shorthand". To some this may sound absurd, but many pundits would agree with him. They believe that social networking websites such as Facebook, MySpace, and Twitter along with texting and other new ways of communication have all affected the ability for students to write properly and with an actual purpose and meaning behind their words written. But with one opinion, another comes to contradict. Andrea Lunsford, a professor of writing and rhetoric at Stanford University, believes quite the opposite from John Sutherland. From 2001 to 2006, she collected 14,672 student writing samples-everything from in class assignments, formal essays, and journal entries to emails, blog posts, and chat sessions. “I think we’re in the midst of a literacy revolution the likes of which we haven’t seen since Greek civilization...technology isn’t killing our ability to write. It’s reliving it-and pushing our literacy in bold new directions.” Lunsford believes that we are growing and even revolutionizing our ability to write, and it is pushing our writing into bigger things. Students today are writing more than any generation ever before mostly due to the fact of the growth of technology and this is giving us the ability to enhance our writing. Before the Internet Americans were writing less unless it was required from a job or from school. Lunsford claims that students are good at assessing their audience and adapting their tone and technique to best get their point across also called kairos. Students have developed the ability to get their points across to an audience because they are so used to communicating with people through online sources; this now becomes a custom and is naturally occurring through the writing of the student. This seems to be a rather remarkable ability acquired just by texting or chatting on Facebook. In Lunsford’s writing samples she did not find any examples of bad writing instead they defined good prose as something that had an effect on the world. Students in America would rather write to an audience that is known rather than for example an in class essay. Students feel more at ease and comfortable with a known audience because to them writing is about “persuading, organizing and debating.” I believe that we are writing a lot these days, it may be pointless at times but students and Americans are writing and trying to get their ideas and points across to others that share or disagree with them. To believe that we are unable to write our thoughts down on paper without a meaningful thought process behind it, I think is a bit exaggerated. As long as students are writing this means that they are thinking and thinking only leads to progression.

3 comments:

  1. I like your last sentence, thinking is progression.

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  2. I really liked how Marco made his sentences flow together. His opinions run smoothly as well. Also he did very well on summarizing Clive Thompson's article. Some sentences really have underlying depth and meaning, well done.

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  3. I Like the the last sentence of your summary where you say " thinking leads to progression". That pretty much defeats what Sutherland is saying by claiming students today dont know how to put their thaughts on paper

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