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Monday, November 15, 2010
“The Confident Gaze”
The Confident Gaze
Deshpande Summary and Quotes
Deshpande goes on describing how the National Geographic magazine mostly gets its information across through pictures. Deshpande says that “National Geographic is known as a photographic magazine”. So in other words Deshpande is saying that to the people who make the National Geographic magazines really care about what images are included in their magazines and what they represent. If the images aren’t good, then no one will be interested in buying the magazine. In order to sell more magazines the photographers stretch the truth on what the images really represent.
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Shekhar Deshpande has written an article about how National Geographic Magazine attempts to portray foreign countries to the “western eye” and how a good image/photograph becomes more important than the actual problems surrounding it in “The Confident Gaze”. Deshpande claims “this power to transform the most repulsive results of human actions around the world into images that digestible is what makes for the culture of National Geographic.” (Deshpande 2) The essence of Deshpande’s claim is that National Geographic Magazine is able to transform images that are not the most appealing but the photographers are able to show the less “repulsive” aspects of a photograph and instead emphasize the more appealing features to appeal to the western eye. Deshpande also states in his article “Human suffering becomes worth a good image.” (Deshpande 2) Deshpande believes that photography is very important in America and images are very powerful. To get a good photo, if human suffering (such as poverty, famine, natural disaster) is a part of a quality image, then human suffering is acceptable to those who take it. I believe that National Geographic magazine does a pretty legit job of photographing the world and the inhabitants of it. This magazine gives us a window to other places around the world and I think this is a very cool and amazing tool which we have.
The Confident Gaze
Nation Geografic's India vs. India's India
Deshpande-summary
English 100/0
In Shekhar Deshpande’s Article, The National Geographic’s misty lens, Deshpande claims that the National Geographic deploys us images that we as a western culture will find entertaining. The images show how unlike us the rest of the world is and often suggests this in a way that promotes “they” should be like us. Deshpande uses a National Geographic volume called India Turning Fifty to support his claim. Deshpande states, “The poverty in India, long a favorite and often the only reference for Western audiences is transformed in the pages of the magazine into an observable commodity.” The poverty that takes place in India, according to Deshpande is used by National Geographic’s photographers to develop scenes that will catch the American eye. Whether it be at home or on the table of a dentist office, the magazine pictures can be viewed without being introduced to the conditions the people in the pictures are subject to. Desphande says, “This power to transform the most repulsive results of human actions around the world into images that are digestible is what makes for the culture of National Geographic.” The gleaming pictures in the print of a National Geographic magazine are made to look beautiful even when their subject is not. National Geographic uses this style of photography to sell their magazines. Deshpande states, “It provides innocuous details of life in India, without any reference to the real troubles of the people or the global conditions in which the country is implicated in.” Deshpande is explaining how the pictures are showing us what life is like in India. The pictures cannot show the whole story however. They leave out the poverty and the pain and suffering that comes with it. Westerners often relate to these pictures by seeing how different these cultures are from theirs. Deshpande goes on to say, “The wars and the subsequent arms race since Independence are less important than the plight of urban poverty. The regional conflicts are more important than the difficult conditions of the people in keeping pace with their material wealth.” Most Americans enjoy their lives when they have obtained what we was westerners believe will make “one” happy. Examples of these things are jobs, cars, houses, jewelry and the list goes on. Our material dependency sometime leads us to believe that other people, even the ones in India are looking for the same happiness. When we pick up a volume of National Geographic and view its pictures we miss the importance of what is really going in the scene. We are entertained by the pictures beautiful print and its majestic images. We relate to the scene in the wrong way by comparing these people to ourselves.
“The Confident Gaze”
In Sekhar Deshpande’s article, “The Confident Gaze,” it explains how National Geographic is a magazine that tries to appeal to the western eye as it portrays life in foreign parts of the world. It explores cultures and religions as well as individual people, mainly exploring their daily lives and the poverty they live in. Deshpande claims, “This power to transform the most repulsive results of human actions around the world into images that are digestible is what makes for the culture of the National Geographic” (par. 12). By this he is claiming that National Geographic is so famed, because it can turn almost any picture or circumstance into a beautiful and correctly represented way. It turns death into something beautiful. It turns life into something magical. Later on Deshpande claims, “It is as if the world needs to be posed in the appropriate way to the Western observer, he could not see it in its bare essentialities” (par. 13). He tries to explain that the photographs aren’t raw pieces of footage, but are rather thought out and posed. They are fabricated in a way to be acceptable to the eyes of the Western world and in a way to not offend but beautify other cultures. These photographs may not show entirely the foreign world, but they help broaden views about life that is foreign to our own. Some people may argue that posing and fabricating photographs to beautify cultures, takes away from the reality of the situations. I hold that it may take away from the complete reality but it helps broaden the Western worlds views in a way that is not to radical, yet just harsh enough to get the point across which is ultimately what the buyers want.
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Sunday, November 14, 2010
The Confidence Gaze Summary
One person that goes by the name of Shekhar Deshpande made an article, more like an explanation on the photos taken in that article. What he talks about in his article called "The Confident Gaze" is how people like you and I, who live in America, are part of the "Western Eye." What this means is that our culture here of course different to the culture in India, we find ourselves to say we are doing fine and the world around us is doing fine as well. Obviously, prejudice exists in the Western World as well, described in Deshpande's artice, he is describing the photos in the article, what he describes sounds more like something that would be appealing to those in our culture. "The photograph from the album of their correspondent-photographer that begins the section shows the Western white man resting on the side panels of the vehicle while three young women from the hills of the North serve as his "props." The most "attractive" of these women is looking at the camera, with a posture that seeks approval, while the other two prefer to transfer to transfer their connection to the camera through their steady look at the more attractive and more confident companion" (Paragraph 5). To most, if not all, of the people who live in the Western Culture (i.e.America) find this photo described in the article quite appealing and rather entertained by the photo. We believe by the photo, we assume that if we ever intend on moving or traveling to there, we are to be within attractive women and living the life of luxury. For those who think realistically, or live in the Indian culture itself, that is not how life is over there in India, and thus people think differently of each others cultures. Whereas there is in fact a different angle that the photographers can use where Deshpande says that "Human suffering becomes worth a good image" (Paragraph 9). Shown on the cover of the magazine of that issue, it shows a child that has a look of fear and curiosity in it's eyes, as well as has the look like his face is eroding due to the poverty in that country. This does in fact have more of a realistic look towards their culture but can however be simply over-exaggerated. Deshpande also stated that the "Constructions of self-identity comes through a representation/images of the other" (Paragraph 14). Later on in the same paragraph he explains that by looking at these pictures of "The Third World" culture India is known for, Deshpande says that the pictures explain what we would have been what the pictures portray if we did not advance or evolve into a society or "civilization" so quickly.
The Confident Gaze Summary
Summary: Deshpande
Summary: Deshpande
In Shekhar Desphande’s essay “The Confident Gaze”, the photographs in National Geographic magazine are the focus. Desphande starts by introducing issue of celebrating India’s 50th Anniversary of Independence. An Indian child with his face painted red graces the cover. Desphande claims that National Geographic magazine has the power to report the “issues [or] situations… [but at the same time] sanitize and even beautify the blood and the gore of the conflict” that the country is experiencing (par. 12). This claim is significant because he argues that this magazine is praised for educating America about the world and its culture but the photos that are included do not portray the reality. He also claims that although we admire photographers and what they are able to give readers, in terms of culture, “we forget that the photographs and contexts…represent a very conscious effort by the editors to make the world…a happy place especially for the Western eye” (par. 9). This is significant because it emphasizes the idea that although photographs are something that our society treasures, we may be cherishing the wrong values. Desphande argues that this is because “the photographs are rich in their content, but entirely dishonest in their relationship to the environment” (par. 13). Another point of Deshpande’s was the concept of the “Third World” and how National Geographic portrays it as “represent[ing] the backwardness in time and accomplishment to the West” while also “providing images of what ‘would have been’ if” they had not taken the steps toward being more Western (par. 15). This text concentrates on the power that photographs, especially ones in National Geographic, have on us as Americans. We depend on this magazine to inform us about the world through photographs, but if it is unable to provide us with legitimate and truthful images, it is not doing its job.
Deshpande Summary
It makes a blissful scenario in which, to the Western eye, makes it look happy or pleasant. We look at the problems around the world comfortably on our couches without being troubled because of the way the photographs are taken. Another claim Deshpande makes is the fact that human suffering starts becoming something that we can use as a valuable picture. As readers, we find ourselves more intrigued by the wretched for many reasons. Also Deshpande elaborates, “Human suffering becomes worth a good image”. In other words, suffering from others invokes a spark of curiosity towards us and that's how magazines like National Geographic can reel readers in. The suffering of others makes a good picture because it's more "interesting" to read rather than something wonderful in the world that is going on. Or maybe because of the suffering, it lures more readers in to make them feel sorry in a way.Human suffering can bring in people’s attention rather than something else that is going well in the world. He also says that the magazine is sensitive to some parts of topics they discuss. For example, it beautifies and sterilizes conflicts and blood from the situations. The magazine is detailed in the misery of their conditions, but Deshpande says it cannot be this way. He says that National Geographic of known for their photographs and that is where the big impact is made. Another issue Deshpande makes is that even though India has made 50 years of independence, the magazine is still making a relation in which we are comparing their success to our standards or technology, democracy, and etc. Lastly, Deshpande makes the point that regional conflicts are more important than keeping up with their material wealth.
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Media Watch Summary
Henry Petersen
English 100O
November 14, 2010
In the article about our beloved magazine the National Geographic, Shekhar Desphande paints us a picture of India and its inhabitants mainly of how they are portrayed through a western eye. He begins with giving credit to the magazine on how well it has educated the world. Then immediately gets into the intense looking little boy on the cover of National Geographic. As far as photos go Desphande states “The identification that the reader is expected to have with this photograph has to be with the confident and accomplished posture of their own man in India”. So not only are the readers of this magazine seeing something as how India has supposedly changed the men into these symbols of confidence in India, but Desphande goes on to say how the women in the photo are simply being exposed to an alien world. In the article in the magazine, India is depicted as a confident country that has changed many a time, but the women are still used as tools, the men are still all powerful, and still aren’t used to seeing the world if technology. Photographs of the world shown through national geographic are meant to be seen by a variety of age groups, and the people in America that read these articles, expect a certain level of humility towards the readers. They don’t want to see too much of the realism that is happening in our world, but they want to see just enough so that their thirst for adventure is quenched. As Desphande puts it: “It is slick, it is technically flawless or even adventurous, and it attempts to sanitize and universalize the uncomfortable as well as different elements of other cultures.” To see the people of India suffering from poverty or possibly starvation, these camera men are directed to take the best possible shots from which can be shown to the Western Culture with an approving eye. The contrast of American culture and India’s is of astronomical difference. Where America has a happy go lucky “looking” lifestyle, India is just figuring out what the country itself needs to do , in order for it to prosper. It’s as though the people of India are portrayed as lesser mortals in America’s eye’s. Or possibly as savages. Seeing the people and the way they live, and then looking up from the article to see your favorite football game is on, you can’t help but notice the difference. Seeing the world through a camera lens wil only show you so much, but this is what National Geographic wants. Desphande describes what the magazine is willing to do in order to get a good shot, and what the viewer is expected to see. He states “It is quite sensitive to trouble spots and trouble contexts; it does not pretend to evade such situations. But while it covers or represents such issues or situations, it can sanitize and even beautify the blood and the gore of the conflict. This power to transform the most repulsive results of human actions around the world into images that are digestible is what makes for the culture of National Geographic.” To sanitize bloodshed, to beautify poverty, and to make it seem like everything is right in the world is just what America wants. Through our eyes, life in and of itself aren’t all that bad, but if we were to see what the camera man is shooting exploiting the people all around the world trying to get approval from their employers back in the states. Its as though our western culture is not yet ready to see what the world is truly like, if a family is watching national geographic on their television and they donlt like what they see they can simply change the channel. In the magazine the camera men do it for us. Through exposing India through a magazine that is read all around the world, primarily the United States we will only learn what the magazine shows us. All in all Desphande depicts the world of India with an honest eye for detail, not only does he explain how much we are shielded from the true India but of how long this has been happening. We have it pretty damn good in America, but Desphande just wants us to realize that the world isn’t as bright, colorful and happy as we have been seeing it.
Monday, November 1, 2010
A Reflection on Selfe
Selfe explains,“This chapter will attempt to illustrate the ways in which change is modulated and complicated by forces of stasis by forcing attention on a series of images that come from commercial advertisements about technology. These advertisements reflect a portion of our collective American cultural imagination about technology….they reveal us, as Americans to ourselves.”(par10) She implies that our view of our self has been compromised. We dream of a "global village" and "world harmony."But when it really comes down to it a global village “suggest the possibility that Americans could be asked to relinquish their current privileged status”(par13)Says Selfe and that is wear The “Electronic Colony” comes in. In reality “…while we maintain the vision of linking people around the world, we imagine ourselves, not as simple members of this electronically constituted village, but rather as discoverers of the village, explorers of it’s remote corners, and even colonizers of it’s exotic peoples.”(par15) Americans take the high seat once again. We are the "suppliers".
In our advertisements we have exotic images of traditionally dressed ignerent savages.
We remain disconnected and above them. our ads are “…illustrating how generous Americans can be in providing other needier countries with useful technology, and providing the story a potent cumulative power.”(par30) says Selfe while pointing out our racism and how many ads are amplifying it in a subtle way. “Technology is not the solution for all the worlds problems-and indeed, it might well be a contributing cause to many of them.”(par33) she suggests. "Equal opportunity.... Americans like to believe is open to everybody."(par36) There is a story told to us over and over again about hard work and Fair Play. It's the story of the golden times in the 1950's where the idea was to help everyone be just like us as westerners. We use images from the 1950's to advertise things like “…citizens of the twenty-first century can achieve the same kind of happy security and personal well being that was enjoyed by citizens of the fifties-by purchasing a software package rather than a new home.”(par41) says selfe pointing out an ad featuring a nuclear family with the slogan "How to keep up with the Joneses, the Gates and your kids." Selfe is challenging us to look at this critically. As Americans we have no background of a real global village or true equal; opportunity. We have a society of the “Limited privileged.” Reality can be confusing and difficult to discover when you grew up thinking the opposite.She goes on to address Gender roles. We tell ourselves that computers are a tool to be used to enhance the lives of men and women equally.But Selfe points out that “Computer games are still designed for boys; computer commercials are still aimed mainly at males; computing environments are still constructed by and for males”(par44) we are ignoring that these differences are there. the basic idea is that “Men use technology to accomplish things; women benefit from technology to enhance the ease of their lives or to benefit their families” (par52) she admits there are exceptions but this is pretty much how it is. The ads show Beautiful women advertising sleek computer screen but no key boards.
Contrasted by ads of serious business men ready to work with their computers. Selfe says educators goals should emphasize "The importance of educating students to be critically informed technology scholars rather then simply expert technology users."(par63) She ends extorting educators to challenge their students and promote positive change.
Lest WE Think The REvoltion Is a Revolution
In Cynthia L Selfe’s book she mainly states that images of technology are changing our ways of thinking. In a section of the paragraph Selfe states that “Men use technology to accomplish things; women benefit from technology to enhance the ease of their lives or to benefit their families.” What Selfe means by this statement is that men use technology to make a living and to make the money in the house, while women use their technology to cook, and clean for their families. The roles back in the fifties have changed gradually throughout the years and many of the things that were introduced then have changed a lot now. Selfe doesn’t just talk about how gender roles were an issue. She also talks about how women back in the fifties were judged mainly for their beauty. In car ad’s for example they used women to try and sell the car, now a days you’ll watch a car commercial and notice that they mainly talk about safety because it’s the one thing that people seem to care about more than ever. She also says how we hope computers can help us make the world a much better place for us to live in, and hoping one day students will be able to be productive in the classroom. What she mainly means by this is that she hope that with the technology we have now that we will someday be able to change the world for the better. In relation she also says, “One of the most popular narratives Americans tell ourselves about computers is that technology will help us create a global village in which the people of the world are all connected—communicating with one another and cooperating for the commonweal.” What she mainly means by this statement is that one day we will be able to get along with everyone because of the technology we have.
Claim: Americans used to only care about what men wanted in the fifties
Cynthia Selfe
Selfe
Selfe also talks about how Americans like to believe that technology is open to everybody, male and females, regardless of color, class, or connection. “If citizens of all kinds are to have access to technology and the opportunities it provides, we do not see such a narrative imagined in the Land of Difference narrative: if technology is to improve the lives of all Americans regardless of race and class and other differences, our collective ability to envision such a world is not evident in these images.” (Selfe 304-305) In this quote, Selfe is explaining that even though we believe that technology is open to everyone no matter what race, religion, gender or color you are, we are not able to see this in reality but only in our minds. When we look at commercials, or ads in magazines we only see the same image over and over; the white American family or man/women. Even in or ads we aren’t able to see this equality.
The final claim that Selfe makes is the “Un-gendered Utopia” and “Same old gendered stuff”. In ads men are pictured and seen as the big dogs, they are the people who have professions and make decisions at work and at home. Women will be the “typical” stay at home mom who cleans, cooks and takes care of the children. Americans believe that the internet can help change the views of genders and make both genders equal but we are stubborn to change these views but attempts are being made.
One) “ If technology is to improve the lives of all Americans regardless of race and class and other differences, our collective ability to envision such a world is not evident in these images.”(Selfe 304-05) She proves this by the images that she shows and within the pictures the same type of people constantly occurring throughout them.
Two) “the un-gendered utopia story, encourages educators to see and understand computers as educational allies that can support efforts to create new kinds of educational and economic opportunities for students regardless of gender.” Americans believe that technology is the way to go when getting rid of sexism and giving equal opportunities to everyone regardless gender.
Selfe Summary/Quotes
In the introduction part of the chapter Selfe says that “When English teachers get together to talk about technology, we generally end up talking about change.” As evidence Selfe later goes onto saying that according to Moore’s law microprocessors double in speed every eighteen months. Also that English departments have changed some of the methods they used to teach. In another part of the introduction Selfe states that “Quite simply put, like Americans, we hope computers can help us make the world a better place in which to live.” As evidence for this claim Selfe says that we hope computers can make students more productive and help us communicate better.
Lest we think the revolution is a revolution: summary and claims
Summary
What Selfe is saying is that this is a perfect example of actions speak louder than words; we say we want equality for all but then our advertisements show everything but. If it were true that we wanted equality than the images that we see the most would include that equality, but instead show your classic white family who are the most fortunate. Yes technology is bringing us one step closer to that equality but with our everyday ads portraying otherwise there are a lot of mixed signals.
What I believe Selfe is trying to imply is that America has this reputation of being the land of opportunity but in reality a very select few get those opportunity, and even then they take a ridiculous amount of time to achieve. We started with the slavery which ended with a war for freedom, then there were the civil rights movement which included a mass amount of protests, then women’s rights which also had a lot of protests involved. Current day America we have Arizona trying to eliminate immigration from the entire state. The opportunity is greater than most other countries but there will never be opportunity for everyone.
Summary and Claim: Selfe
B.) Claim #1: “We have a long and admirable history of exporting technological expertise to less fortunate neighbors…” (pg. 295)
Evidence: Selfe uses an ad that displays a member of a tribe adorned “…in ritual dress with feathers and face paint, presented as a wondering savage, vulnerable to the crueler effects of civilization…and [unaware]… of the power of the technology being used to his benefit” (pg. 296). By using the picture of a tribe member and their culture, it portrays the “less fortunate neighbors” of this narrative (pg. 296).
Claim #2: “…Americans use technology to become world travelers, to learn about—and acquire knowledge—of other cultures, while remaining comfortably situated within their own living rooms…comfortably separated from the other inhabitants of the global village” (pg. 296-297).
Evidence: Selfe supports this claim by posting an ad that clearly shows a poor attempt at creating “one world” and “one tribe”. The ad consists of “two youngsters…[presenting] a bizarre tribal image” and “scattered…postcards from exotic destinations and lists of foreign vocabulary words, two picturesque French men…and a veiled Middle Eastern woman…” (pg. 297).